Some people think that money is the best gift to give young people while others think other types of gifts are better for young people.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Opinions are divided on whether giving money to young people is the ideal gift or whether other kinds of presents are best for the receivers.
This essay will both perspective, and think that nothing can be more precious than a well thought personal gift from our loved ones.
The idea that money makes excellent presents is advocated by people on the grounds of individual and financial maturity. With regard to the former, nowadays, young people already have what they need in terms of toys and gadgets, and so giving them more will not be of benefit. A financial gift can leave them free to choose the gift they want. The second is that the majority of problems they face in life can easily be overcome with cash, so money helps them in planning for their future by setting up an enterprise if well managed, and the child can learn valuable skills from the process of choosing to save or spend their money. This could make them more financially mature and independent.
Other presents, I believe, are a better choice for reasons related to spiritual values and skill development. As far as the first idea is concerned, money is an impersonal gift, and it shows no understanding of the interests of the receiver. It is, therefore, more appropriate to give something that shows that you understand that adults know what the child desires, such as a piece of jewellery or a t-shirt from his or her favourite sports club. A further explanation is that an educational gift such as books or a useful present such as a watch, allows the youngster to develop or improve his/her skills and so directly benefits.
In conclusion, I think both of these perspectives have merit. However, I think that the case for other gifts is better than money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73089700997 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52842037061 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538205980066 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.6996902101 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.4 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312400030588 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128471524178 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888853244789 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20626647444 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858540365989 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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