Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?
As technology becomes increasingly popular, it is sometimes argued that the new technology has had an influence on communication between people in various ways, and in my opinion, there are both positive and negative effects.
That the use of technology to develop the types of relationships between people can be detrimental for reasons related to lack of communication and isolating people. With regard to the former, there is an increasing tendency for young people to make friends online. They spend more time with their faces glued to their phones, chatting with virtual friends on social networking applications. This means they may also be less likely to interact face-to-face, which can lead to anxiety about communicating with people around them. For instance, a person who always interacts with others by texting and chatting may lack communication skills. The second downside is that people are detached from what is going on around them even when they are out, as can be seen by the many people staring into their mobile phones as they travel or walk around.
I believe that the most important benefit of advanced communication tools is that they have had a positive impact on relationships in business, education, and social life. First of all, business people around the globe are able to connect with others effortlessly. In addition, online applications and services create a proper connection between students and teachers. A good example of this is that students have access to a wide range of lessons available on the Internet no matter where they are. The other idea is that many people use social media in order to communicate with new people and find those who share common interests, and they interact through their computers rather than face-to-face.
In conclusion, I think that the benefits of using technology are greater than the downsides as long as the users can control the effect of scientific advancement on their relationships.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, so, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26984126984 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00902480626 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584126984127 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.4647030597 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.333333333 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267102589489 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975548571913 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604378975618 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150043199894 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063878163855 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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