Some people think the money spent on developing technology for space exploration is not justified. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Space exploration is one of the most flourishing spheres all over the world. However, some people consider that the money invested in developing technology for space exploration is not justified and there are more beneficial ways to allocate this cash. I completely disagree with this statement and express my notion in the following paragraphs with smooth examples.
It is indisputable that the official authorities allocate lots of money to flourishing technologies for space exploration like developing strong satellites. This application assists to have research or learn the other planets, stars, as well as the atmosphere. For instance, it is irrefutable that creating one satellite or rocket is extremely expensive, however, astronomers can discover space with the help of these technologies. Therefore, if people enhance their knowledge about astronomy, and the government expends sufficient cash for exploring updated devices for deep space exploration, this will bear its fruit in the upcoming future.
Moreover, there are a plethora of benefits of distributing money for establishing space. The first merit is people can assume about uncertain future incidents. For example, falling the asteroids or meteorites which are extremely detrimental celestial bodies, and "NASA" that is one of the most notable organizations in the world is having so many researches about these accidents in the present day. The next advantage is people can be aware of the problems facing the atmosphere. As a result of this consequence, we can prevent these issues by ascertaining creative ways. Furthermore, it is the wisest option that distributing money for technologies that help to explore the space.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59459459459 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1702815321 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6196098041 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.461538462 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33849357489 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123096454965 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132107325425 0.0667982634062 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250392428551 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861089374575 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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