Some people think that the most important factor in choosing a job is the salary/ money. To what extent do you agree/ disagree ?
It is an indisputable fact that when it comes to searching for an occupation, salary is one of the utmost concerns among applicants. While I agree that earnings play a vital role in adults’ life to some extent, I hold a firm belief that other factors are more of importance.
One predominant reason why money should be taken into serious consideration is that rewarding salary is a prerequisite to ensure our survival. On the grounds that in this ever-growing society, consumerism has been increasing on an unprecedented scale, therefore a great deal of money is required with a view to keeping abreast of the basic human needs. As a result, finding jobs with reasonable wages is a must for workers, given that they are held accountable for paying their bills, utilities, healthcare and food.
Nevertheless, I am of the opinion that job seekers should place a premium on many other instrumental criteria. The first and perhaps the most persuasive incentive is that job selection ought to be derived from self-fulfillment. Specifically, passion makes it possible for labourers to be content with their current occupations as well as willing to apply themselves to what they are working on; otherwise, employees are inclined to feel frustrated, thus leading to the fact that they will not work to their capacity. As a consequence, in every hardship they always find creative ways to cope with it. Another fundamental motive is attributed to the fact that employees should make allowances for the potential of working ambience. In other words, in many workplaces where teamwork is obliged, the onus is on them to be assimilated into the working culture. Hence, in order to not only gain the highest efficiency of tasks but also increase morale, one needs to accompany cooperative, energetic and supportive managers and colleagues.
In conclusion, from the aforementioned points, it is my reaffirmation that although sufficient income is in some ways crucial, job satisfaction and working environment are of great significance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1709.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21036585366 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15444780788 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606707317073 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.9729014908 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.461538462 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117779527052 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375472313265 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386734743353 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0735513338958 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297180996706 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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