Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?
In recent years, the fundamental role that museums have to play has gradually become a subject of increasing controversy. In my opinion, museums may and should be both entertaining and educational.
On the one hand, it may be argued that the main role of museums is to entertain. In fact, museums are tourist attractions, and the aim of them is displaying a collection of fascinating objects that the public desire to admire. An ordinary viewer will find it boring if that person have to read or listen too much educational content, therefore, museums should put more attention on creating exciting experience for a large number of people than learning. This kind of museum is displayed attractively and may have interactive activities such as virtual reality and even organize games as a part of exhibitions.
On the other hand, museums should focus on education. It is widely known that the role of museums is to teach visitors about the past, and thus the history of exhibits needs to be explained. Take professional guides for example. They tend to offer headsets to viewers in order to listen to detailed commentary. Listening specific explanations from the guide can help people easily acquire new information and understand very well about the objects and events that survived or happened in the history. From our insights to the past, we can apply them to our present lives. As a consequence, museums can bring useful and valuable knowledge to the public about numerous aspects of life.
In conclusion, it seems to me a favorable museum should be able to provide an interesting and educational experience so that visitors may be happy and learn something simultaneously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07194244604 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94174236542 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586330935252 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2763149758 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.714285714 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233634469434 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087736357964 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857687943713 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154017750223 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048224227478 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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