Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
This day, it is true that is some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while other believe that the purpose of museum is to educate. In this essay I completely agree that the museum should be tourism attraction.
In the one hand, when the museums made foreigner attraction so many benefit on only youth but also every people want visit there. It is because from psychology of aspect, a place with title of tourism attraction it is more interesting to visit. For example, Lawang Sewu in Semarang, it is a museums whose function is tourism attraction, the societies who to visit here, not only from students buy only from workers even from the old community came with motive a holiday but without their knowledge, they also learn. As result from the aspect of people, who comes from vacation but it can also learn, while from the museum of revenue will increase.
On the other, the disadvantage when the museums that function is education place want less people to drop in here. It is because many humans think education place only student will visit here. For example many people who feeling queer when general people going to museums and they believing that museums just for students. As result interest society decline to see museums and then income for museums downward also.
In conclusion, paradigm of people the museums that has function of vacation is more interesting rather than education place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 289, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a museum' or simply 'museums'?
Suggestion: a museum; museums
...example, Lawang Sewu in Semarang, it is a museums whose function is tourism attraction, t...
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Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...s that function is education place want less people to drop in here. It is because m...
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Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ms and then income for museums downward also. In conclusion, paradigm of people the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91803278689 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39982027008 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524590163934 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0153112651 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.090909091 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1818181818 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331727908411 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155055085646 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164579073434 0.0667982634062 246% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250501771077 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.179178662819 0.056905535591 315% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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