Some people think that music plays an important role in society other think it is simply a form of entertainment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this day and age, certain individuals believe that music plays a significant role in human life, while others argue that melody is no more than a type of enjoyment. From my standpoint, I concur with the view that music not only brings happiness and relaxation but also various benefits to society. In the following paragraph, the reasons and examples will be explained to support my stance.
Initially, music is regarded as one of the most famous ways of entertainment worldwide. Many countries prefer to celebrate their occasions with music, enjoy the loveable and funny moments. It helps people stick together and through music, they express their feelings and opinions. Moreover, when listening to their favourite melody, individuals not only relieve stress and anxiety but can also change their mood. To exemplify, when a person feel bored or worried, he or she tends to opt for a soft song to refresh the mind or an upbeat music to hype he or she up.
On the other hand, there are numerous merits from music to society. First and foremost, a song is represented as an icon of one country, which means a viral song gains a lot of income to the artists, and enhance the well-known of that country. For instance, if a melody becomes popular over the world, the viewers will want to know more about the tradition, culture and the language of the country and the information of the singer. Futhermore, music also creates many jobs such as producer, composer, dancer, director who work cooperatively to promote the song to public. When the song become famous, they also have a lot of profits and enhance their reputation.
In summary, although some inhabitants considered music as a mean of entertainment, from my point of view, with the power of music, it not only brings income, reputation but also the culture and tradition of that area can be spreaded widely throughout the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in summary, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86956521739 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66961550753 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3625630315 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127464713864 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043630198092 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358698784514 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0784024592103 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203084341947 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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