Science tells us about the activities which are good for our health and others which are bad. Millions of people all over the world know this and still do unhealthy activities. Why do you think it is and what can be done to change it?
Write at least 250 words.
Despite having been learning about beneficial and detrimental activities which are related to health, certain individuals still partake in unhealthy exercises. Many factors can be attributed to the roots of this issue and in tandem, many feasible remedies have been proposed.
First and foremost, the primitive reason for this problem must be the lack of knowledge in mass people. Without appropriate awareness, it is impossible for them to distinguish between healthy and unhealthy activities, hence leading to several unwanted diseases. Moreover, individuals find it difficult to break the habits once they get involved in it. In this day and age, more and more harmful activities are increasing rapidly, certain people now are too easily addicted to unhealthy lifestyles. To cite an example, numerous citizens consider smoking as a major part of their life. They believe smoking can release their tiredness, thus they can not reduce their dependence on cigarettes, although knowing that they are damaging their health.
From my perspective, to tackle this issue, the authority should impose strict quotas on the unhealthy products, for instance, upsurging the cost of cigarettes or alcohols. Not only the government, residents also should promote the healthy lifestyles for people around them via media to enhance the life standards and stay away from unhealthy activities.
To summarize, it is obvious that these harmful habits are an inevitable part of one person’s life. However, with the prepared knowledge and recognition, people can hinder these detrimental lifestyles and have a better and healthier life in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5219123506 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82188734814 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629482071713 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5963315932 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16624177448 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534808677659 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464362242412 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913579457238 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481027170056 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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