Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of the old houses in the local areas. Other think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own style. Discuss and give opinion.
Without a doubt, residential architecture has a considerable bearing on urban landscape; thereby, house design has always been a topic of interest. While there are voices that the style of old and new houses should be uniform, others claim that how houses are built is the personal choice of every household. This essay would demonstrate the benefit brought about via allowing people to design their houses in their own style.
There are certain points where houses in a neighborhood should be confronted to a fixed architectural style. One of the plausible rationale laid behind this view is that the coherence derived from the homogeneity of houses might visually satisfy observers’ sight; nevertheless, the relentless repetition of solely a style sometimes reflects a mundane and monotonous figure of the residential areas. Moreover, providing that the already existing houses are so grotesque and old-fashioned that they are unable to feature some indispensable functions of modern lifestyle such as spacious garage and gym room; then, it is pointless for new inhabitants to follow suit.
Instead of rigidly forcing an uniform house design, house owners have the autonomy to adapt individual style to their houses according to their demands and personal aesthetic tastes. Since constructing house requires depleting astronomical budget or even taking out a mortgage with considerable monthly interest, an output which does not meet its owners’ expectation and creativity concept, results in the deficiency of pleasure in the living experience. As for those who are eager to exaggerate their prosperity or their unique view on the art of architecture, houses that are built at their will would appear to be an undeniably firm manifesto to their talents and their lives of abundance.
Overall, although maintaining a uniform style for house building might have a good side or two, I strongly concur that households are entitled to apply personal design on their house construction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, while, as for, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40836012862 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94944882199 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617363344051 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.5415861647 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.2 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389512333799 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162874161883 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849764308101 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241213209835 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592810137204 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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