In this contemporary era distance between parents and their offerings is increased due to numerous reasons. This situation causes a plethora of complications for their child's improvement. I, however, believe that this phenomenon creates lots of problems in child development. This essay shall discuss the disadvantages of this situation in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin with, people in today's society are workaholics, due to this situation they don't have adequate time to spend with their youngsters. Moreover, children are kept in the house full day, and they spent their time with other children and watching television. They can not learn the moral values and virtues from their parents. Furthermore, teenagers are study full day at school and they are not spending their time with parents. This situation creates a gap between parents and kids.
Additionally, juniors are studied in advanced school, and their parents are not that much educated as a result of their mutual understandings are not match. Besides this, nowadays offspring are spending their longer time with teachers consequently they disobey their parents. Students who study in a hostel and live far away from their families can also create trouble for them. Nonetheless, people should spend their time with children and teach them moral values.
To recapitulate, I, reiterate to say that parents should spend their time with children, and a bridge must be built between their relationship. This phenomenon has many disadvantages that merit.
- The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking Smoking is banned in certain places so mobile phone should be banned like smoking To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Now big cities have many problems What are these problems Do you think the government should encourage city residents to move to small cities and towns 61
- Online education is becoming more and more popular Some people claim that e learning has so many benefit that it will replace face to face education Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable Discuss both view and give your opinion 78
- These days more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your o 56
- Nowadays more people are choosing to live with their friends or alone rather than with their families this trend is likely to have a negative impact on community To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...workaholics, due to this situation they dont have adequate time to spend with their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, furthermore, however, moreover, nonetheless, so, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43459915612 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82697902879 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556962025316 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5589412266 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233650654682 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098624754223 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052344645846 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172415662203 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410325823337 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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