It is an undeniable truth to say that nowadays vas majority of adults are move away from their Born place from couple decades. Move away for a purpose is meaningful for them as it provides numerous benefits. I, however, believe that advantages are far better than disadvantages.
To begin with, settle in metro is offered plenty amount of opportunities in order to get jobs and better healthcare facilities. People who born in remote area doesn't get benefits of these amenities and eventually they have to migrate in well developed cities. Moreover, people at urban area get plethora of chance to do extraordinary job and business. Therefore, majority of citizens are settling away from their born place.
Additionally, increasing number of jobs and business are also Super beneficial for country in terms of GDP growth and it will also raise the economy of country. However, living at countryside also have a little benefits as it offeres less pollution compare to the cities. In exemplification, one can get good medical treatment in urban, while in outskirts there are quite less pollution and an individual can get prevention from deadly disease.
To recapitulate, living in metropolitan offer plethora of job opportunities and better healthcare facilities. Live in cities have numerous merits than demerits.
- Some people believe that parents should be responsible for encouraging their children to take regular exercise Others argue that the main responsibility for encouraging children to do so should lie with schools Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 56
- Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying career life than those who frequently change their jobs To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Many people believe that cycling is a healthy and environmentally friendly mode of transport However it is still unpopular in many countries What are the reasons What could be done to encourage the use of bicycles among wider population 61
- Now big cities have many problems What are these problems Do you think the government should encourage city residents to move to small cities and towns 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ilities. People who born in remote area doesnt get benefits of these amenities and eve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29523809524 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00324843025 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604761904762 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5851873053 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159810392535 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570633784717 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592129815626 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914960345674 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783933713554 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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