In order to stay up to date, some believe in printed media as the most efficient way because they think that it is more influential than any other news sources. This essay disagrees with this perspective because the internet has undoubtedly become the most powerful media in terms of sharing information. Online news can be accessed by people in every corner of the world in seconds, whereas newspapers are not interactive and are not able to provide people with latest news as quickly as the internet.
Contemporary advances have created the global village, where people can share information and communicate in an effective way irrespective of the place they live, and online news has therefore become the most popular mean of updating about what is happening in the world. A huge number of news forums and social media platforms are freely available to internet users to learn about any incident anywhere in the world by just clicking a button on a website. Not only can they reach information, but live update, which is the most interesting feature of this media, can also be watched. Facebook, for instance, is the most used site all over the world, hence, news readers frequently log in to this website in searching for newest information. Likewise, you tubers keep uploading videos related to immediate national and international special events, so that people can see them as quickly as they occurred. Thereby, online news is obviously the most powerful and effective form of media in view of gathering news.
Conversely, these days, reading news in a newspaper is not as popular as surfing the internet, on account of absent interactivity and immediate availability of news. In other words, reading a paper is a one way process, in which readers cannot comment on what they read or share the news with other people. Moreover, readers have to wait until the next day to read more about the incidents they learn today. This is supported by a recent study conducted at Oxford University, in which they claim that aforementioned two reasons account for 95% of study population to switch to the internet from newspapers.
In conclusion, computer is the fastest and most interesting way of knowing latest events as it is a two way and a live process, hence it is the most influential type of news tool. On the other hand, in recent years, preference for written news, which lacks above attributes, has drastically reduced
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 459, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...tive and are not able to provide people with latest news as quickly as the internet. Con...
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Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an effective way" with adverb for "effective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...e can share information and communicate in an effective way irrespective of the place they live, an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, hence, likewise, moreover, second, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97058823529 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7423436812 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522058823529 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 647.1 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.7737823149 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.2 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250335792731 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845962330556 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077452098374 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160188804806 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859132434838 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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