The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the tourist information office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
The figure elucidates the amount of enquiries obtained by the holidaymakers information office in a city from January to June in 2011. At first glance, it is evident that by letter or email, in comparison with other aspects, became the only aspect which faced a significant drop.
To begin with, there was a gradual palpitation in the total of enquiries by telephone in which it, initially, stood at just below 1000 and achieved approximately at 1000 in March. Afterwards, it remained stable in the following month, nevertheless, it uplifted tremendously, soaring to 1600 by the end of the period shown. However, the number of enquiries in person, which was the lowest aspect in January, experienced an immense growth between January, which made up at just above 400, and June, which constituted at well beyond 1800 and it had the highest number of enquiries in June.
In contrast, January to May witnessed an enormous decline in the value of enquiries by letter or email in which it upright positioned at just beneath 800 in January and plummeted highly to well across 200 in May, and it remained unchanged in the next month.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'holidaymakers'' or 'holidaymaker's'?
Suggestion: holidaymakers'; holidaymaker's
...the amount of enquiries obtained by the holidaymakers information office in a city from Janua...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93193717277 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83461318956 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586387434555 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.8849082149 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.0 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8333333333 22.9334400587 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 5.23603664747 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121823376215 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670709707014 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566016526288 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847240444981 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043437205482 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.2329268293 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.