People have different views on what would be the best way to approach the news. While it can be argued that reading newspapers is the best choice, I maintain that other media could be a more effective way.
On the one hand, the idea of learning through conventional newspapers is attractive for several reasons. Firstly, newspapers are a reliable source of information. This is because their contents are often managed and carefully censored by the government. Thus, readers could trust this information to be accurate. Secondly, these articles are more suitable for senior citizens. Elder people, who are familiar with newspapers, find that the Internet is a complex system. Therefore, it is difficult for them to use the technology for reading news.
On the other hand, there are a variety of reasons why I believe learning through other media is superior. Firstly, other media provide people with diverse information. There are a range of news besides daily news on TV or social media such as soft skills shows, entaintement or even scientific programs. attracting a lot of viewers. Secondly, other media is easy to access. Due to the widespread presence of the Internet, users can update information at any time and anywhere with only an Internet-connected smartphone or laptop. For example, people can use their phone to receive news while hanging out with their friends.
In conclusion, although the newspapers are a reliable news source, I believe that other media offer more diverse information and higher accessibility. In my opinion, people should carefully select news on social platforms to avoid getting wrong knowledge.
- International travel is becoming cheaper than before so more and more countries are opening their doors to tourists Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages 67
- The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed but it has also created problems that did not exist before What are the most serious problems associated with the Internet and what solutions can you suggest 67
- Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news However others believe that they can learn news better than through other media Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... reliable source of information. Because the newspapers contents are managed and ...
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Suggestion: , find
...people, who are familiar with newspapers,find that the Internet is a complex system. ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Attracting
...taintement or even scientific programs. attracting a lot of viewers. Secondly, other media...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15537848606 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74636399594 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573705179283 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0769519689 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.8888888889 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9444444444 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354756115837 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954554062921 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777062329496 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207158414315 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758813796832 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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