Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children's development than playing computer Games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Children's are the backbone of every country. Here,some people assert that they should play outdoor sports or activities rather than computer games to stay fit and healthy. Here,I agree with this statement.
Commencing with the first notion, outdoor sports or activities are very initial for children's physically and mentally development.which is worthwhile to prevent them from health deceases.such as, obesity, depression as well as less eyesight. For example, during the pandemic of covid-19. The majority of children's play computer games for long time in a day.like pubg, Free fire which make them lethargic and aggressive. Moreover, outdoor sports like athlete, cricket, tennis and football gives them to a opportunity to play in national and international tournament which is fruitful to make career in sports. For instance, Indian cricket players first kohli has a playing talent since their childhood and now his name in the best player's list.
Moving toward the second school of thought, most of computer games are based on action, thrilling and mistry which make them aggressive and violent. As a result, computer games like blue whale which was very dangerous and they gave difficult tasks to children for reach to next state. Furthermore, outdoor games give a great deal to make new friends. Children can learn and teach their playing skills to their friends. Although, they can improve their communicate behaviour by playing outdoor sports with other children's. Some outdoor sport events where they can participate in tournament to get winner trophy as well as name and fame.
To recapitulate, outdoor activities play pivotal role in children's life to stay healthy than computer games. Chlidren can flourish their future by playing sports like, cricket, football and tennis.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... their playing skills to their friends. Although, they can improve their communicate beh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41428571429 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69083857652 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585714285714 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.3432282488 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.75 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272839673219 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924939407767 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604868447687 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187636280286 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303726152779 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.