Some people think that parents have a great influence on their children. Others believe that the media is a bigger influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
It is widely believed that media has affected a lot to children. However, there is persuasive argument that parents are the main factor that influence the development of their children. Both of these view will be discussed in depth in this essay.
On the one hand, media has a great impact on children. It is undeniable that children currently have more opportunities to get close to Internet, where there are numerous entertainment methods, such as videos, games or books. As a result, they can make children enjoy comfort and have interesting experiences. In addition, educational shows on TV help children to learn lots of useful lessons and skills, which enhance their school performance and may be neccesary for them in the future. For instance, watching English songs and films enables children to improve their listening and speaking skills and increase their fluency in English. However, media is not always good for children because sometimes there are some websites contain contents that not suitable for children and that may lead to serious consequences if children follow it.
On the other hand, parents make an immense contribution to their children's development. Obviously, parent is the the person who children spend most time with and children tend to imitate what they see and hear. Therefore, parents are an example of their children. For example, if the parents behave well and respect others in public, their children tend to do so. Additionally, living in loves of parents, children can feel the happiness and have chances to get a comprehensive development. For instance, when the whole family play sports together, there not only improve their relationship but also create a good habit for children to train their body.
In conclusion, both of these views are reasonable and persuasive. To my view, parents should spend more time with their children and support children with their abilities.
- Some people think that parents have a great influence on their children Others believe that the media is a bigger influence Discuss both views and give your own opinion 92
- Many countries aim to improve their living standard by economic development but some important social values are lost as a result Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages 61
- Many countries aim to improve their living standard by economic development but some important social values are lost as a result Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23225806452 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7660871811 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570967741935 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.930712738 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.375 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309643638691 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113493458348 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430381908313 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21072616879 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490444953173 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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