Some people think that parents should be responsible for teaching children how to be good members of society. However, other people believe that school is the place for children to learn how to be good members of society.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Mothers and fathers are frequently thought to have responsibilities to educate youngsters to behave well in the communities. Conversely, some advocate that teachers are the certain people in charge. These two contradictions and my preference for the former perspective will be outlined in the following essay.
To begin with, the two reasons why parents are favorable options to teach children are the permanent maintenance of this behavior and the thorough obedience of sons and daughters. First of all, early instructions obviously generate premature habits, which follow them throughout their entire lives. parents should give tutorials about basic qualities such as respect, being grateful, and being brave at an early age, all of which assist their children to imbibe those characteristics into them. Moreover, there is no doubt that youngsters tend to obey their parents more. As a result, letting parents guide the children on how to deal with society creates enduring conduct.
On the contrary, the practical environment is a mighty advantage when schooling is concerned. To explain, teaching moral lessons through speech resembles educating scientific theory without any real practices. Hence, the mere knowledge that children obtain normally cannot be put on an act unless the children have a subject to apply. Meanwhile, school is commonly regarded as a small-scale community, which perfectly responds to the above problem involved in experiential conditions.
To conclude, training youngsters on the way to becoming right-minded people are both families and teachers’ missions due to the mentioned reasons. In contrast, if making a choice is mandatory, I would favor parents’ coaches on account of the long-lasting morality and the complete obedience of children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Parents
...low them throughout their entire lives. parents should give tutorials about basic quali...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, hence, if, moreover, so, well, while, in contrast, no doubt, such as, as a result, first of all, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64814814815 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03663276442 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.685185185185 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9274028434 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.928571429 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256244139847 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681144387536 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541512704242 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125801888733 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373722013459 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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