The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.
What are the causes of this continued rise?
Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(85, 85, 85); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">The global population has markedly witnessed sharp growth on an account of several factors. Hence, some suggest that this alarming increase may cause trouble to citizens. The causes and my perspective on this problem will be outlined in the following essay.
family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(85, 85, 85); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">To begin with, two major reasons seriously contribute to this are the enhancement of scientific achievements and the revolution of governments’ policies. Firstly, to the former root, since the Industrial revolution, human society has shifted from craft production to machines, which makes mass production become possible. this undoubtedly raises the expectancy of the major residents as a consequence of the excessive food and modern medical treatments. Furthermore, the flexibility of governments in upgrading the inhabitant’s living is also worth mentioning. More and more countries are now making an effort to boost the infrastructure and mutual services as they represent the wealth and the prosperity of those regions, which indirectly again lengthen human lifespan.
family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(85, 85, 85); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">On the contrary, this is personally not the most urgent issue because of family planning of the governments. Avoiding having more than 3 children in a family, Chinese, for instance, now successfully control its population and is estimated to be the greatest country in the economy in the following years. this policy is so strict that numerous nations recently have encouraged people to give birth again. Instead, global warming and the COVID-19 pandemic are more significant problems at the moment when all countries are vigorously taking action to find solutions.
family: "Times New Roman"; color: rgb(85, 85, 85); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline; white-space: pre-wrap;">To sum up, even though the rise in human population is negatively resulting from the advancement in science and technology, what should be addressed first and foremost are temperature-rising and the Coronavirus.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, then, for instance, on the contrary, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2331.0 1615.20841683 144% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.7761627907 5.12529762239 132% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.53555358052 2.80592935109 162% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 674.1 506.74238477 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.121993509 49.4020404114 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.307692308 106.682146367 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4615384615 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0929908755592 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042313793479 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338953362544 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0690941694045 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015621341117 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.7 13.0946893788 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 11.25 50.2224549098 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.2 11.3001002004 161% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 22.34 12.4159519038 180% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.