Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different views about parents are the most reasonable people to teach their children how to be a nice person in society. While some argue that it would be better for children to be taught by school, I believe that both parents and school play an important role in this.
On the one hand, The family is the most attached place to the child. This means that the child will be greatly affected by the family. Children look at their parents as their role models and tend to mimic their behavior. Therefore, children learn more effectively when their parents teach them how to be respect, polite to everyone, love animals,... For examples, my neighbor kids always respect the elder because their parent taught them to behave in a standard way. Hence, it is very important for parents to teach their children to be nice people in society.
On the other hand, many believe that school plays golden rule in children life. School as well as parents is also an important factor in teaching children. Moreover, school is actually a miniature society, the children who go to school will not only learn how to read and write but also learn how to treat their friends and teachers properly. For example, teamwork with friends will help the child understand solidarity and coordination.
From this arguments, one must conclue that both parents and school should teach children to be a nice person. Schools and parents should work together so that their children have the best environment to grow up.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1245.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84435797665 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38594703763 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529182879377 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7837690055 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9285714286 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367148403168 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139952798408 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899351297205 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259275908872 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734257406645 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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