Society with socially responsible people, who help others and work for the betterment of the world is the need of the hour. However, to build a society with such good members is both the responsibility of parents and school. This essay will discuss how parents and schools play a role in building a society with good members.
Home is the first school for children. They watch and learn from their parents, children view their parents as role model. Teaching children how to behave in a society, respecting elders, sharing and treating everyone as equal at early age becomes a habit when they grow up. For example:We taught are nephew to share chocolate with all family members from young age, now he does involuntarily. He shares his chocolates even with his friends now. It is these habits that build the character and make them well prepared for the future.
School is the second home. Children gain academic knowledge, mingle with children from different backgrounds, color and race. School should teach them social responsibilities apart from academics like participating in charity event, working for an NGO. For example: Taking students to a NGO and showing them how they can help them will build compassion in students and help them understand their duties in society as they grow. These activities taught in school will make them better citizens who understand social responsibility.
In my opinion both parents and school play a important role in imbibing good qualities in children to make them good members of the society. Instead of placing the burden on one, working to together will help children be more responsible and good members of the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, well, apart from, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0652173913 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65523107241 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550724637681 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8118458077 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.375 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260224432033 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933241765989 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705515909133 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17319660027 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654432539908 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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