Museum is a place where the countries most valuable and historic monuments are kept. It is a place where one gets an opportunity to revisit the history and understand the rich culture and heritage of the country.
Every one should get access to visit the museum because educating people on the countries heritage should be free of cost. It further promotes and gives equal opportunity to all be it rich or poor the right to enjoy and see the countries history.
I recently visited a museum in Kolkata, West Bengal. I got to see the monuments of not only India but also other countries. I got to see the Emblem of Ashoka Pillar, Egyptian Mummy, Giant Mammoth's skeleton, rare Siberian tooth tiger. I really enjoyed the experience. At the same time I saw lots of people from near by village and far standing in the queue with their kids to collect the ticket to visit the museum. I felt bad that people from villages not only make an effort to get their kids to visit the museum to educate them but also pay price for it as well!
I know money is need for the maintenance and paying the staff, instead of charging the visitors the government could organise funds and donations to collect the required money to pay off the maintenance and staff and make it free for the public. Most of the countries have made museums free for public for example in England most of the museums are free for general public.
By charging fee to visit the museum would only discourage the people from visiting the museum. I believe it is the right of every citizen in the country to see the countries history and feel proud about it. This should be free of cost.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e one gets an opportunity to revisit the history and understand the rich culture ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
... museum because educating people on the countries heritage should be free of cost. It fur...
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Suggestion: albeit
...promotes and gives equal opportunity to all be it rich or poor the right to enjoy and se...
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...al opportunity to all be it rich or poor the right to enjoy and see the countries...
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Suggestion: countries'; country's
...or poor the right to enjoy and see the countries history. I recently visited a museum...
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...ot only India but also other countries. I got to see the Emblem of Ashoka Pillar,...
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... of Ashoka Pillar, Egyptian Mummy, Giant Mammoths skeleton, rare Siberian tooth t...
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...hs skeleton, rare Siberian tooth tiger. I really enjoyed the experience. At the s...
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...the same time I saw lots of people from near by village and far standing in the queue w...
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...or the maintenance and paying the staff, instead of charging the visitors the gov...
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...to pay off the maintenance and staff and make it free for the public. Most of the...
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ngland most of the museums are free for general public. By charging fee to visit the museum...
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Suggestion: countries'; country's
...every citizen in the country to see the countries history and feel proud about it. This s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, really, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53355704698 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33908023334 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.4213987579 49.4020404114 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24627327191 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764258331844 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838431162089 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12930682215 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757126697742 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.