Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The question of whether children should learn from their instructors or their parents has long been contentious. Some people believe that children should learn to be good citizens from their parents, while others believe that school is the ideal place for a person's character and knowledge to develop. Although children learn a lot in school, I believe that being educated by their parents is more likely to provide them with a firm foundation.
For many years, parents were thought to be the only ones who could fully educate their children at home. This is due to the fact that youngsters will obey their parents more than they will obey their teachers. In several texts, it is also stated that parents are their children's first teachers. They should instill in their children the values of obedience, respect, and honesty, which are the fundamental characteristics of a decent person. They should also begin training their children at an early age in order to assist them in naturally penetrating. My childhood buddy, for example, is a wonderful person who is always pleasant to everyone and who goes out of her way to assist me whenever I have problems. This is based on the fact that her parents shaped her personality from an early age.
On the other hand, not every parent is capable of caring for their children and instilling positive traits in them. As time goes on, the world changes, people's lives become busier, and women are no longer the primary breadwinners; they may not have the time to stay at home and educate their children. Instead, they send their children to school with the expectation that teachers will teach them everything; not only information, but also the full and speedy development of their personalities.
To summarize, each of the ideas has advantages and disadvantages, and it is up to each individual to choose the best selection. I believe that parents should begin teaching their children about basic values at an early age.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 618, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an appropriate way" with adverb for "appropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...arn to behave with many types of people in an appropriate way. In conclusion, while school teach c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90714285714 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4438594435 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521428571429 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3563754072 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355092626364 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137677568781 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910414291501 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234986138119 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884028606123 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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