It has been a controversial topic, who should teach children social etiquette. They are the future of tomorrow, only studies won't mold them to be a good human being. Societal values also should be thaught them properly. Some people argue that, this should be thought in schools rather at home by parents. Others have an opposite opinion about this.
On one hand, people believe that schools should have the responsibility to teach children about how to be a good human being to others in addition to academic lessons. Children spent most their time at schools rather than home once they start their studies. So the teachers have more influence on them especially in todays context. For instance, if we look in to the curriculum pattern of developed countries we can find many subjects in relation to this filed. Moreover, teachers can teach social lessons at schools by showing good examples by implementing such practices in class rooms. Like giving them group projects and activities which requires each studies co-operation and co-ordination.
On the flip side of the coin, some believe that parents are the right persons to teach these kind of lessons to the children. Children always have more sentimental approach to their parents than anyone else. Therefore they will listen anything that their parents say to them. Furthermore, in every child's mind their parents are their heroes. They will automatically try to copy what their parents are doing at home. Hence, parents can teach children about social values by showing themselves as an example. Such as, recent study in Canada revealed that students who live with their grand parents and parents tend to show more respect to older people compared to children living with hostels or foster homes.
In my opinion, both parents and teachers have the same responsibility to mold a child as a good social animal. We can not put the entire responsibly on either of them, both of them have different kind influence in children. So a combined approach would be more beneficial.
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- Some people think that travel is necessary to learn about other nations, others, however think that tv and internet is best way to learn discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- Modern forms of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time people spend seeing their friends. This has had a negative effect on their our social lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... parents are the right persons to teach these kind of lessons to the children. Children al...
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Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...oach to their parents than anyone else. Therefore they will listen anything that their pa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05341246291 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58272767862 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545994065282 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7543678301 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0952380952 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0476190476 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251750813366 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771336710042 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646224745391 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159453015538 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406355159579 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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