Some People think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe tat school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Good etiquettes among the masses of any nation reflects its cultural values and hence helps in strengthening its social structure. Few people claim that its parents duty to inculcate good habits and values in their children in order to make them responsible citizen, while others advocate that school plays an indispensable role in achieving the same goal. Although, home is believed to be the first learning place for any individual, support from school is equally valuable and can not be overlooked. This essay will emphasize various reasons why both the aspects are crucial for the better upliftment of society and ignoring any is not going to be fruitful at all.
It is an undeniable fact that parents are the primary role model for their children. Their upbringing goes long way in building better and strong personality as a human. Family helps in binding children with their traditional and cultural values, teaches them manners and efficacy of following responsible behaviour. For instance, giving equal rights to both the sexes in a family is carried forward by generations, which later results in forming a safe and strong society for everyone. Hence, it is quite right to say that parents are the first teachers for developing bright personality and successful future for their children.
On the other hand, school, where students spend almost 8 hours daily away from their parents, has a major contribution in developing responsible and educated citizens. School is an amalgamation of both educational and human values. Students learn how to talk and behave appropriately being a part of group. They acquire value of effective and respectable speech with their peers, teachers and later with their society members. For example, without effective education one keeps on floundering to follow social norms. So, learning institutions in association with family has a major role in teaching social values.
To conclude, good social behaviour in children is extremely important for the betterment of any society. Although, many people argue on role of parents and schools in achieving the target, but as per my opinion, this should be treated as a joint venture and a collaborative approach from both sections of society is crucial for producing good human beings.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31534090909 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80480323103 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571022727273 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4386296733 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.058823529 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7058823529 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227407575415 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698993389436 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534186886808 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147152315924 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508836293647 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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