Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some individuals believe that children should be taught by their parents how to be successful people of community while others are of the opinion that schools are the most suitable places to learn this. Although latter point is beneficial in some cases but I believe that parents play a more important role in teaching them how to be good members of society.
Schools are more trained and equipped in educating children to become good individuals in society. Teachers spent their undergraduate years learning how to teach students becoming better people in both moral and knowledge fields. For example, in Vietnam, Vinschool is well-known for having nurtured successful alumni such as Le Thi Minh Thu and Cao Nguyen Dinh Phong, contributing to the future in this country. However, this is not enough for school to be chosen as the place to grow children becoming prosperous individuals in society.
Parents play a crucial role in children upbringing to become good members in a community. Parents and children have a close-knit relationship so that parents can easily share and teach their children about practical lessons that they have met before. For instance, one to one lessons can be instilled to children through fairy tails that their parents told them every nights before going to bed, and thus children can be indirectly absorbed a sense of compassion and integrity. For this reason, I believe that parents should be the ones helping children to be a good grown-ups in society.
In conclusion, although schools are more equipped to teach children but I believe that domestic upbringing plays a more significant role in nurturing a children to become a truly good person in a community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one lesson', 'a lesson', or simply 'lessons'?
Suggestion: one lesson; a lesson; lessons
...y have met before. For instance, one to one lessons can be instilled to children through fa...
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Line 3, column 568, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'grown-up'?
Suggestion: grown-up
... the ones helping children to be a good grown-ups in society. In conclusion, although s...
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Line 4, column 152, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...ys a more significant role in nurturing a children to become a truly good person in a comm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10752688172 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73416332349 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501792114695 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.3733223405 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.545454545 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385999670305 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166379336165 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103632498668 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251912569245 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123160509651 0.056905535591 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.