Some people think that people who are over 60 years old should retire and stop working. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Handful of individuals consider that person beyond sixty years should leave services and terminate their career. Personally, I strongly agree with the statement and this essay shall outline the reasons behind this point of view.
Firstly, when the people reach the age of sixty, they are filled with experience but it is their best age to relax and cherish their life. Moreover, they can be with their grandchild or their family and teach them meaningful knowledge they have learned during their lifetime. In addition, they can share story and cultivate wisdom that can change children’s or family members perspective on life. For instance, survey conducted by Nepal Senior Citizen Welfare found that more than 60% of children and members spending time with their parents have maintained good moral and the grandparents seem more cheerful than time spent alone.
Secondly, it is the best age to tutor the new recruit and make them eligible perform better in their work. If new employee is deprived of such knowledge and skill set, then they might have disorganization while performing their responsibilities. For this, newly employed personal should have proper guidance from the past job holder. This not only helps to learn from their experience, but also increases efficiency in work environment of the organization. This, this helps to create proper management in their work that leads in success of organization.
In conclusion, in my opinion people after sixty should retire and spend their quality time with their children and family, and they should pass on their skills as well as knowledge to the new employee.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'recruit'.
Suggestion: recruit
...condly, it is the best age to tutor the new recruit and make them eligible perform better i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23664122137 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64084628674 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603053435115 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8452363604 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.333333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4166666667 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14321739974 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594972712783 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451189550456 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105075761235 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381268406553 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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