You want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• explain why you are selling
• describe the furniture
• suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ..................,
Dear Eden,
I am writing this letter to let you know I am selling my Sofa, and last week we just had a conversation where you mentioned you are in need of a comfortable sofa for your living room.
Recently I am planning to relocate to the nearby city Kenya, and I today I went to see the room. It is when I noticed that the living room is not that spacious as my previous flat, for this I want to sell the furniture and get the new one.
The furniture I had owned is specially crafted as per my order and is of unique design and quality cushioning. The most special aspect is of the fabric which is of superior quality that is not easily found in the market. Regarding the comfort, long movie night will pass easily. Even more, you can connect the parts to make a small bed. Filled with feature and quality I will recommend you to purchase the sofa. It is so loved by me that I find it to be comfortable if I sell it to one of my friend and be sure that it will be in good care.
I will be free coming Saturday on 29th of July, just three days before I move to Kenya. Therefore, you can be here at my house this Saturday to see the sofa.
Hope you like it. It would be my pleasure if you purchase the sofa.
Best Regards,
OC
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.04897959184 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23867039732 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555102040816 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0503963418 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8571428571 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257955508101 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075181365199 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690877732701 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140629600467 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648912974698 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.91 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.04897959184 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23867039732 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555102040816 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0503963418 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8571428571 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257955508101 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075181365199 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690877732701 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140629600467 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648912974698 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.91 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.