At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantage.
It is found that the population of senior citizens are far more lower than that if teenagers, and I believe this trends will have stronger advantages rather than its drawbacks.
One of the major advantages of this is that larger number of teenagers will create a circle of energetic, enthusiastic and dedicated youth who are filled with motive to mark a positive influence for their country. This as a result leads to the economic development of nation. The other aspect is that youth can pitch ideas in innovative way that can excel in the achievements, indicating success in their projects, thus a remarkable growth of their mind-set and skills. For instance, majority of areas filled with higher number of youth can develop new skills , learn different set of skills that can help to form a team, which helps in unleashing their talent in a productive manner.
This of course will have a drawback where in future there will be excessive number of senior citizens. Since there are more old people they can be a barrier in the development, because extreme budget as well as assistant should be allocated to look after them. Therefore their higher numbers might bankrupt country’s economy ; however, with proper awareness and planning country can overcome the problem. There might be higher population but the surplus saving in the past will cover up the expenses as the section of profit from their past earning is contributed in development of country. Also, in the future if the ratio continues then there will be adults to take care of the old ones.
In conclusion, the merit is stronger as having excessive number of young adults does help in boosting economy and have progressive development proper planning and awareness can minimize the drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'lower' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: lower
...e population of senior citizens are far more lower than that if teenagers, and I believe t...
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Line 3, column 560, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r number of youth can develop new skills , learn different set of skills that can ...
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Line 3, column 662, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a productive manner" with adverb for "productive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... which helps in unleashing their talent in a productive manner. This of course will have a drawbac...
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Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...should be allocated to look after them. Therefore their higher numbers might bankrupt cou...
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Line 6, column 38, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... In conclusion, the merit is stronger as having excessive number of young adults...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, of course, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04436860068 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.674574123 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549488054608 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.0961276687 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.363636364 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6363636364 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156985087534 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624854987639 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416510769357 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925167037904 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153546949843 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.