Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport while other people think that mental strengths are more important . Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is evident that there is a need for various factors for a sportsperson's success. While many people oppine that mental qualities are inevitable to help sportsman reached the top, I contend that the basis for success must be physical strength.
On the one hand, a strong mental attitude is of paramount importance for gaining triumphs in sports. Any psychological instability could exert undesirable impacts on a sportsman’s performance, further on the overall result of a team. Maintaining strong and stable mental health is also essential when it comes to failures. Individuals must be mentally strong to face criticism and pressure from sport fans and news coverage, then overcome these to achieve their goals. Apart from that, there is a necessity of determination and dedication. Obviously, sportsmen who have a sense of competitiveness and a win-at-all-costs attitude tend to train harder and gain more wins as opposed to those who lack of motivation and enthusiasm.
On the other hand physical power must be the foundation of all success in sport. Only the sense of dedication and zeal for a sport are not enough to lead to victory. Seen as the least physically demanding sport, yoga, for example, requires plenty of stamina and flexibility, which are only required by constant and long-term practicing. Yet all other sports demand those who wish to succeed to be vigorously active, especially the athletic ones, such as weightlifting, running and so on. Some sports stars and athletes even use illegal substances, like performance-enhancing drugs in order to maintain their physical condition despite the risks for the career.
In conclusion although the lack of either mental qualities or physical ones cannot help sportsmen reach the top it is impossible to sit without being physically strong. Sports players should maintain the balance between psychological and physical condition to be in trim in all performances
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, thus, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32247557003 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14858212133 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612377850163 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8893587273 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.933333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223555141484 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07044433657 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581061139978 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135171487475 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657743411051 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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