Some people think that poverty is the reason behind most crimes Do you agree or disagree

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Some people think that poverty is the reason behind most crimes. Do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, property is an essential thing to everybody. Therefore, it is not hard to know that the reason behind most crimes is poverty, but except it there are still some reasons which are eclipse.

On the one hand, the shortage of money can easily lead to abduction, robbery, etc,... People who is unemployment or living under poverty can have a lot of financial problems, so they have to commit crimes as a way of making a living. Cupid which can strongly lead to cheating and corruption is also a core reason. It effects negatively not only in the national economy but also our daily life.

However, beside poverty there are still more reason. First of all, children who grow in bad environment or used to be a victim of child abuse, domestic violence can utterly have a wrong mind-set. They might become dangerous components for social, they abhor social, for they engage in criminal activities as a way to revenge on social. Second, people might take part in unlawful acts for many reasons. They commit offence because of their career, family, etc,...

In conclusion, many crimes can be caused by many reasons. But to my opinion, there are a lot of crimes that not because of poverty.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8115942029 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50447567813 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1266673619 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6153846154 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166736918156 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565010068744 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783046365898 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110111318453 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711935986002 0.056905535591 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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