Some people think that printed books are no longer necessary in this digital era as all writing can be stored electronically. Others think that printed books still play important roles. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many adults opine for paper-based books do not need any more in the technological stage when all essays can be converted into digital books, while others perceive that ordinary novels are still an essential part of our life. I believe that although reading books can reduce the chance to cause eyesight diseases, e-books are more important because they can decrease climate change.
Some statistics released the data that reading fiction and non-fiction is one factor that does not contribute to short-sight diseases such as myopia. This is because papers are not having any blue light, which usually is on gadgets. As long as readers keep the proper distance and time breaks to build a reading habit, book lovers are less likely to have a short-sight disease. As an illustration, in the comparison of two decades in the USA, a medical report indicates the general public having read contents on the papers has less than half of the probability to have an eye illness due to the fact that papers do not have unnatural lights hurting our eyes’ structure. Despite this, I, therefore, believe that skimming e-resources are the prime trend to save the earth.
Since all contents of books can be transformed into electronic materials, it is a dramatic step not printing any piece of paper so as to avoid deforestation in our globe. That is to say that publishers are no longer to manufacture their brand-new magazines or novels by using papers, which means that demands diminish opportunities to cut down jungles. Consequently, our earth maintains more plants to avoid greenhouse gas which is caused by fewer trees to absorb carbon dioxide and further increase the higher temperature on earth. To cite an example, the World Health Organization has evidence that our global temperature has decreased slowly due to making good use of E-books and the less frequency of destroying woodland.
In conclusion, although gaining knowledge from traditional materials can protect our visual perception, I think human beings adopting advanced technology to absorb terminologies from diverse online platforms is a far valuable way to sustain our earth.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...more important because they can decrease climate change. Some statistics relea...
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...ving any blue light, which usually is on gadgets. As long as readers keep the pro...
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...ctronic materials, it is a dramatic step not printing any piece of paper so as to...
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...ample, the World Health Organization has evidence that our global temperature has...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, still, therefore, while, as to, i think, in conclusion, such as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80082066187 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629310344828 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.0459731756 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.833333333 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170452761397 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579760681322 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549874675384 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988236388637 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561507993529 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 366, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...more important because they can decrease climate change. Some statistics relea...
^^
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... non-fiction is one factor that does not contribute to short-sight diseases such ...
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Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ving any blue light, which usually is on gadgets. As long as readers keep the pro...
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Line 3, column 477, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...the USA, a medical report indicates the general public having read contents on the papers has ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 540, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ead contents on the papers has less than half of the probability to have an eye i...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ctronic materials, it is a dramatic step not printing any piece of paper so as to...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...c step not printing any piece of paper so as to avoid deforestation in our globe. That ...
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Line 5, column 588, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ample, the World Health Organization has evidence that our global temperature has...
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Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...erception, I think human beings adopting advanced technology to absorb terminolog...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, still, therefore, while, as to, i think, in conclusion, such as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80082066187 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629310344828 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.0459731756 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.833333333 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170452761397 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579760681322 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549874675384 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988236388637 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561507993529 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.