Some people think that the range of technology available to people is increasing the gap between the rich and the poor. Others think it has an opposite effect. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
There is no doubt that technology has had a tremendous impact on our lives. Most of the people depicts that the availability of technology to the masses is bourgeon the gap between the rich and poor. On the other hand, some think it has a positive impact on the society. I agree with former notion. However, i will discuss both the views and give my opinion.
To commence with, there are several reasons which increase the gap of rich and poor. But thr primary reason is the affordability of technological products. It is very difficult for meager income folks to bought these prohibility expensive things. For instance, according to recent survey reports, almost 25 percent of masses in the society was not able to fulfill their basic needs. Also, they do not use these technological things. Because these denizens of the country are lived under the poverty line. Whereas, the rich society can easily afford these products. In this way the availability of technology is increasing the discrimination in tihe society.
However, certain inventions and discoveries decreased the gap between the poor and rich. Because these products are easily available in the market. In current scenario, the most of the people are accessing mobile phones. They can learn anything or grab knowledge about every work at free of cost on internet. In addition, many technological gadgets are available at low cost. For example, many famous companies like reliance jio and idea. They are providing smart phones to their customers at low cost. So they can learn or access to the internet. Many amenities are providing to the citizens who have less income to reduce this gap. Although, this gap will remain between the rich and poor in the future.
In conclusion, i reiterate my opinion that the technological gadgets are widening the wealth inequality in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06188925081 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71981314186 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553745928339 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.2039582966 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.75 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7916666667 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95833333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28964329467 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719952813092 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818803526457 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173318359858 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126473058924 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.18 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.