Some people think that rich countries should support poor countries in terms of aid for hralth care and education.
What extent do you agree or disagree?
All countries are not rich counties.some countries are developing and others are shown rich rate and one side consider very low ratio in the world. It is arugued that all rich counties people should help poor nations people. Im my opinion, i strongly agree that situation.
It is first necessary to explain, we are human beings and we want best thibgs is our life. however poor countries cant to find the best benefical things for their life style. Furthermore ,the main reason is health. Both categories are rich or poor people want to live cappy camper life. But few peoples are unlucky because they cant to live better healthy life therefore another countries should support and want to supply all medical goods to our poor coubtries. If we take, japan helpds sri lanka and they have better bond both countrirs.
In addition, read makes a perfect man . Thus, they havent to use educational things to study. Education gives better advices and deter thie mad works. At the present lots of peopke addicted to different types of drugs. These types of people not educational people. These types of peopke gone wrong side. Hence, education can makes perfect man in future life. Not all student fee students to prefer to study well and they have one track mind educational life how approch their educatinal goal. Explicitly, we want to suply all educational things to poor countries.
In conclusion, all people like to live to live delerious life. While we want to work together afterward we can prevent our ounlucky days. In my opinion , all developed countrt should help poor people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93656716418 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42881930932 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589552238806 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5625985088 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.0 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.7619047619 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157563776506 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458143848222 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592379279201 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109670372596 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772343708231 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.48 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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