Some people think that school should teach the children to be a good person, however, others think that the teacher should teach them how to develop their career and make money. To extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that children should be taught to become good citizens instead of developing their career abilities. To an extent, I agree that the career education plays an important role in the students’ development. However, I firmly believe that learning about behavior and cognition is also crucial for them.
On the one hand, education contributes significantly to enhance job-specific skills of schoolchildren. It is immutably true that career orientation is an indispensable part of curriculums which helps children identify their strengths and weaknesses. Therefore, they can recognize the appropriate professions matching their abilities. For instance, children who are good at art may become the talent designers in the future. Generally, acquisition of career skills from schools is the solid foundation go the future of children.
Academies not only help children improve the abilities which are crucial for their professions but also teach them how to become good citizens for social. It is undeniable that education has a great impact on the behavioral and cognitive development of youngsters. One clear example is Ethics, which is the subject that includes moral lessons teaching students how to behave appropriately in each situation. As the result, they will not be far into evils when they grow up. Due to all things mentioned above, educating children to become good people should be involved in study programs of institutions.
To sum up, although educators should focus on career orientation, I support that they should also teach about behavior for students to become good people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50403225806 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06614716782 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7090330971 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.5 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261202943984 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851011518997 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670792302368 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170827296563 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395772766434 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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