Some people think that schools should select students according to their academic abilities. Others believe that it is better to have students with different abilities studying together. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Today's era demands for an exceptional level of educational skills, where it has indeed been paradigmatic opinions about the admission procedure. Some knowledgeable persons opine that educational sectors ought to recruit higher level of students. Whereas, others antagonize their view by emphasizing more on every individual's talent for getting acknowledged. Here, this contest is set to discuss the both views simultaneously along with a personal opinion.
On one hand, one of the most pivotal facts is concerned, it is associated with the reputation of learning sectors. In the third world nations, there is an entrance exam to get a place in prestigious institutes. At that time, intellectual skills and general information of one have a major domination to be a leaf of nominated branches. By the way, selecting talented students,they want to set up the image of scholars. In the end, the quality comes first to propel the learning standard at peak.
On the other hand, it is paradoxical that every schooling system needs to allow any sort of pupil from having poor skills to have an expertise. By teaching only intelligent ones, the literacy rate will not ascend due to having a similar proportion of uneducated persons. Therefore, by keeping a country's perspective in mind, the learning organisations have to diminish the discrimination in context of potential. Ultimately, these sorts of interpretations intimate that the methods of choosing learners need to be altered as a matter of justice.
After the scrutinization of both the facets, it can be summarised that everyone has a single brain and two eyes for acquiring education. So, every child should be judged by staying in equilibrium to overcome the problem of illiteracy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 314, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...their view by emphasizing more on every individuals talent for getting acknowledged. Here, ...
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Line 1, column 439, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
... both views simultaneously along with a personal opinion . On one hand,one of the most pivota...
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Line 1, column 455, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ltaneously along with a personal opinion . On one hand,one of the most pivotal ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , one
...with a personal opinion . On one hand,one of the most pivotal facts is concerned,...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
... By the way, selecting talented students,they want to set up the image of scholars. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, therefore, third, whereas, sort of, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29602888087 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18144471858 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660649819495 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.7527520609 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.8 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134939678967 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381818328414 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040412523047 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685517224676 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382504671617 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.