Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems. Others think that there are more important issues. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people point out that the government should invest a huge amount of money in scientific research to cure world health problems while others argue that the authorities spend not only on scientific but also on other important areas. In this essay, I will discuss both views and I believe that the government is expected to invest money in all fields in order to help citizens avoid many health troubles effectively and enhance their living standards.
On the one hand, there are numerous reasons why some people claim that scientific exploration is supposed to concentrate on world health problems to allow residents to live better. First of all, with the development of the world, science plays a vital role in society, there are many vaccines that were developed through a lot of scientific studies. To take the covid 19 as a demonstration, before having the vaccine covid 19, there is an abundance of people who have to deal with it, which causes their health troubles and people inflected with covid 19 can not go to work, which leads them to do not enough money to pay for rent and accommodation as often as they used to. However, thanks to scientific research, residents have been able to prevent disease and it offers people to live comfortably.
On the other hand, I believe that the authorities should pay attention to other crucial areas. To begin with, the governments are expected to invest national spending on environmental protection. In fact, annually, the manufactory discharges toxic gas on a daily basis, which causes people to cope with health troubles such as sinusitis and pneumonia. In addition, the authorities should introduce laws to deter and impose heavy fines on those who damage the forest. They have to pay a huge amount of money as a heavy fine for deforestation.
- Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems Others think that there are more important issues Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- Some people think it is more important for the government to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- The use of social media is replacing face to face interaction among many people in society Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 73
- In many countries people now wear western style dresses such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing Why is this Is this a positive or negative development 84
- competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies how does competitiveness affect individuals is it a positive or negative trend 61
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, while, in addition, in fact, such as, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94407894737 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72573141662 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546052631579 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.7111456257 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.636363636 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6363636364 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8181818182 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22419795868 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824772629305 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800988322733 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159453767321 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078252625355 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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