Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems. Others think that there are more important issues. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is thought that scientific research should pay attention on solving world health trouble, other people believe that there are more neccessary issues. From my point of view, in some situation i mostly agree with the first notion because of its benefits for the resident life. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, in the industrialized world and with the appearence of modern technology that numerous batery and demerits viruss have appeared more frequenly which lead weakness affection for the society, so health research is greatly significant for the social comunities. Not only does this phenomenon improve the cognitive systerm of adolesence which advance their mentality life, but also various appropriate method will be found by scientist, reducing the propotion of death rate in their country. Furthermore, the socioeconomic problem can be narrowed where all individuals have the same opportunities to approach with the healthy's adviced. To illustrate, there was a vurvey by Marky Bayer, the famous interviewer and professor, which is expert about the sucess of european countries which focus on solving world health problems. The statistic demontrated that nearly every countries has got plenty of achievement in their improvement.
However, we can not negate the drawbacks of this problem when compare with the second statement. Nowadays, there are diversity fields that the government should concentrate on which is the fundamentally requirement of residents such as education and entertainment. Moreover, many government take advantage from this investment for their own revenue, harmful influence will be led by this action to the young generation.
To conclude, though my agrument from the essay i totally agree with the strenth of health's research, but it still have some negative aspect for the society. The state need to have clear plans to improve their citizens for the nation's development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48172757475 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87780522177 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9276794212 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.923076923 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152089908703 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053213733383 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790838623222 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980523002985 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732549049993 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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