Topic: Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems. Others think that there are more important issues. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
With the prosperity of modern society and the boom of advanced technology, living conditions have been enhanced considerably in every aspect of life. However, this also arises numerous issues related to world health, particularly after undergoing the Covid 19 pandemic. While there are some valid arguments that scientists should concentrate on coping with human health, others believe that this approach is unnecessary and budget should be invested in more pressing problems. This essay will shed light on both views before giving the final thought.
Obviously, well-being is the most precious gift, thereby adequate attention should be given to solving global health issues. To begin with, although today science is becoming more and more thriving, residents are met the demands in the medical field, a huge number of people who live on a low income do not get instant access to relevant modern healing methods. In fact, there are many patients who are suffering from serious diseases such as starvation, and prolonged malnutrition coming from undeveloped countries like South Sudan. This is because healing prices are cost an arm and a leg to them. Therefore, it is justifiable that scientific research should be paid attention to inventing affordable medicines for the poor.
Nonetheless, others argue that there are more deserved issues that should be solved promptly. One of the top priorities is long-lasting famine which occurs in many places in the world. Despite vast consumer products on the current market thanks to the support of cutting-edge machines, various regions are suffering from crop shortages due to poor soil quality and pests. Accordingly, scientific research could be devoted to creating new genetically-modified crops that could withstand harsh conditions. Another critical issue is global warming, as it could pose a greater threat to all life on Earth than most plights on global health. Hence, scientific research could be valuable in finding the causes of it as well as optimal solutions to curb its effects.
In conclusion, while I agree with the notion that scientific research should put more effort to tackle global health problems, there are more critical issues needing to address swiftly in terms of famine and global warming as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, hence, however, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36211699164 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76292511109 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632311977716 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.734449588 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.3125 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224950521245 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678928219956 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561503723785 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135179396954 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240054355273 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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