Some people think that sending criminals to prison is not effective. Education and job training should be used instead. Do you agree or disagree?
In today's world, the criminal problems have always been a hot topic and left several controversial ideas in the public about how to tackle them. While some people believe in the effectiveness of the prisons, others argue that educating and training the felons are better cures. From my point of view, although the latter is, to some extent, justifiable, I am of the opinion that imprisonment does a better job.
The first thing to notice is that when criminals are sentenced to several years, the safety of the public can be better assured. Although some people are convinced that schooling makes the felons go to the right track, not many of them can actually feel remorse from those lessons but instead, they will use that chance to reoffend. As a result, the peace of the society can be on the verge and the crimes will keep relapsing. Only when the convicts are kept in these four-walls buildings can they become under surveillance and take the punishment.
Moreover, it is not only about better assurance of the prisons to people's safety that I believe imprisonment is more effective but the sentence can speak up as an example of rights ramifications and justice as well. For example, if would-be criminals notice that they are going to be prosecuted and convicted for their crimes, they will be less likely to commit offences with the fear of being deprived of freedom. The chance of getting proper livelihood training or education just leaves another road for those delinquents to reoffend. Furthermore, grave criminals including murderers or assaulters should get permanent imprisonment or even death penalty so that the victims can feel the fairness and justice.
In conclusion, while taking the felons to school and the labour market is another possible solution to the criminals problems, I am convinced that imprisonment is more constructive as it ascertains the public's safety, shows the justice and mirrors the consequences that the convicts deserve.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08307692308 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74925444439 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.1874959198 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.666666667 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0833333333 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207465088913 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700919895224 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490859615315 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11203950836 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056254789174 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.