Some people think that social skills are as important as academic qualifications. To what extant do you agree or disagree
Tradionally, the employers need the high qualifications employees but nowadays with the development of society they need the worker who has high academic and experiences in social skills. Personally, I totally agree with this statement.
There are various reasons why I agree that social skills are as important as academic qualifications. Firstly, social skills are eperiences in society, someone who has a huge experince is a good employee. For example, if someone has more chances to learn will be much wiser than others, they think faster and broaden mind to find a way solve the problems quicker than other. But the academic qualifications still is important standard to test workers.
Secondly, people having social skills will be easier to make a good relationship with each other. Working environment is very important to contact with colleagues, good relationships in workplaces with colleagues make workers working harder and more effective. Moreover, social skills helps people enlarge of friends and enrich their lives. Social skills is a key to make our better.
Conclusion, society is not simple so why we should have extra experiences and social skills is a factor make which make a chance to work in a good position
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 198.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23737373737 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91505158834 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7038037536 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2727272727 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242868245738 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109613570962 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913136276174 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133256445772 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688535605927 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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