Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that today we organize wedding and birthday parties in a luxurious hence we have to spend huge money on these. Some people support this idea as well they believe these are important for both individuals and nations. However, I think it is another way to spending money and I will discuss both view now.
On the one hand there are clear ideas against big celebrations. Firstly, people spend a lot of money on parties, because they have to pay for meals, drinks, place that party organized and band. It is clear that in today’s economical situation earning money is not easy, so spending huge money can be disastrous family fund. Secondly, often young couples spend huge money to their wedding ceremony; as a result they run out of money. In order to this they can do anything else, for example buy a new house or go to travel around the world. Furthermore, some people get jealous with others actions and some of them want to repeat the actions, so parties and ceremonies become big and big.
On the other hand, there are valid arguments to support big parties. From a social point of view, people can relax by dancing and meet their close friends and other relatives. In addition to this, some celebrations essential for family like first birthday and other annual parties. The children’s first birthday have to unforgettable, that they remember whole life. Finally, people can keep national traditions and customs by celebrating these big parties.
in conclusion, there are valid arguments both for and against celebrating big parties is a waste of money and others say these essential for individuals and society. But as I have said I believe we should make our weddings and parties smaller.
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Suggestion: economic
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Suggestion: In
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84300341297 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54835242971 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552901023891 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1336391772 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.6875 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4375 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384760923364 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119191752244 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781055655861 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251910836748 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636257770483 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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