Some people think that spending a lot of on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is convinced that bit more people are more interested to spending a lot on organizing wedding parties, bithday parties, and other commemoration is a dispose of money. However, others vision are necessary for individuals and the society satisfaction. Personally, I believe that bit more people have propensity to spending much money for commemoration.
In the one hand, it is a common necessary advantage that making people comfortable with inevitable atmosphere could incur self-satisfaction and away from gossip. Disturbed by annoying circumstances, people such as relatives whether friends would find it difficult to relish the commemoration and they would have unsavory evaluation. For example, when people hold birthday party at home whereas that is a tiny home and the invited guests are plentiful, it would create inconvenience atmosphere for everyone while they could rent a bigger location. Surely, unsavory rate caused by this fettle. In short, spending a lot of money for commemoration is not waste of money yet it could incur people or self-satisfaction and away from unsavory news in the society life.
Even so, there is a demerit to size up that spending a lot of money for commemoration is a dispose of money. Bit more people are letting down by something that has a low price. The apparent reason is valuable things have a high allowance. For instance, a lower allowance could herd people to find an inconvenience wedding venue in Jogja. Therefore, additional funds could reach the pleasurable venue. In other words, view on spending a lot of money for commemoration is a dispose of money should be avoided inasmuch as a demerit on it.
To sum up from where I stand, the paradigm to spending a lot on organizing wedding parties, bithday parties, and other commemoration is necessary than the mindset of using excessively money is just a waste of money. Using a lot of money to organizing commemoration could incur satisfaction and away from unsavory news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, whereas, while, even so, for example, for instance, in short, such as, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1397515528 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15454734255 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475155279503 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0913128487 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.4375 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283056646886 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965084855281 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764647499116 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185831968155 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334820531371 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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