Some people think sports are important to society. Others say that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give opinion.
People have different views on the importance of sports. While some people argued that sport is merely a recreational activity for humanity, I personally believe that it plays a vital role in reducing the costs of healthcare services since playing sports helps enhance public health.
On the one hand, it is understandable that sports can count as a leisure activity because not everyone can become professional sports players. To be successful in their sports career, the sportsmen need to have innate talents and great perseverance, but the fact is that not everyone is so lucky to be endowed with these traits. Take football, the King of sports, as an example. Although millions of people around the world choose to become a soccer player as their permanent job, there are merely some of them having superb athleticism to become football legends, such as Lionel Messi and Cristiano Ronaldo. Therefore, sports are simply regarded as activities for people to relax their mind and body during holidays.
On the other hand, I tend to opine that society can reap financial benefits from doing sports when the population becomes healthier. With the convenience of modern technology, more people are leading to a sedentary lifestyle, which negatively affects people’s health and causes many serious diseases. In other words, the government will have to allocate a larger budget on healthcare systems to take care of their unhealthy citizens. However, if the population is encouraged to do just simple sports, people will certainly become more physically active, helping them relieve stresses and tensions, and minimize the risk of suffering from many disorders. As a result, spending on public healthcare services will decrease significantly when the population is healthy.
All things considered, although sports are enjoyed mostly for recreational purposes, they still benefit society due to their contribution in saving national budgets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42434210526 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82464291556 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608552631579 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.637641946 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.846153846 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163341394193 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.058759518177 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454846946466 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947843661458 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460857167961 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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