Some people think students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers in order to improve the quality of education while others say this will lead to loss of respect for teachers.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion?
People have different perspectives on whether high school students should be allowed to leave feedbacks and criticize their teachers. Although this could be perceived as being disrespectful, I believe constructive response from pupils could be beneficial to education system.
On the one hand, proponents of the idea that students should not be allowed to make comments regarding their teachers claim that this can result in dishonour and lead to indiscipline in the school. It is common knowledge that pupils should obey all the instructions from teachers, as students are still very young. Having a student, who is impulsive and inexperienced, criticizing a professional teacher is not appropriate. Moreover, the majority of students are considered not mature enough to leave feedback. These response might end up being personal criticism, which is unreliable in improving the quality of the education.
On the other hand, many advocates believe that it is advantageous for both pupils and teachers if an open environment where students can express their opinions is held. This open conmunication system would enable students to actively think of the lessons, require what they want their teachers to improve. In addition, these feedbacks from pupils helps teachers recognise little mistake and weaknesses that they could not yet realize and find out how to make adjustments to their approach. All the lessons afterwards could suits vast majority of students and might result in better learning experiences.
In conclusion, while some people argue that students should not leave comment on their teachers, I strongly believe that by encouraging pupils to provide feedback about their teacher’s teaching methods, the education system would significantly be improved.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 511, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this response' or 'These responses'?
Suggestion: This response; These responses
...ed not mature enough to leave feedback. These response might end up being personal criticism, ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 523, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'suit'
Suggestion: suit
...roach. All the lessons afterwards could suits vast majority of students and might res...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, so, still, while, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58148148148 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9558270552 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.847800747 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.583333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327994860018 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116662242679 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661164630697 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20707752714 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261691801697 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 511, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this response' or 'These responses'?
Suggestion: This response; These responses
...ed not mature enough to leave feedback. These response might end up being personal criticism, ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 523, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'suit'
Suggestion: suit
...roach. All the lessons afterwards could suits vast majority of students and might res...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, so, still, while, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58148148148 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9558270552 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.847800747 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.583333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327994860018 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116662242679 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661164630697 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20707752714 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261691801697 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.