Some people think that studying oversea bring them many advantages, and others think they encounter many problems.
Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
It is indisputable that studying abroad is now a common tendency. There are still a lot of controversies surround it. opinion are divided on whether studying oversea brings them more advantages or problems. I personally believed that there would be more issues that oversea student have to face up to.
People advocate studying abroad argue that going to another country, students, first and foremost, will have a better opportunity to improve the second language. A study was conducted by university of Melbourne has proved that oversea students tend to be more fluent in the language of the country that they are in. This is due to language using frequency as well as native environment. For some people, studying in another country could also help them to broaden their horizons since educational system in each country is dissimilar, students can learn not only academic knowledge but also studying methodology.
On the other hand, going to another country for study, student might suffer from a myriad of disadvantages. Shock culture is one of the common problems. There would be numerous culture clashes, alien culture that they might encounter and adapting to a new environment with new culture is not easy. Discrimination and segregation are remarkable predicaments oversea students might come across as well. These situation happen in both European, American countries and even in Korea or Japan, there is a lot of people bias against South East Asian. Pursuant to Washington post, 154 participants who were oversea Black, Hispanic and Asian reported that discrimination correlated with their anxiety and depression.
In conclusion, studying abroad, albeit somewhat beneficial, is associated with more difficulties and problems that can affect students' mental health negatively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, well, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44086021505 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90274786986 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616487455197 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3585521127 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157739688091 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494077188467 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556932684098 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0927705199711 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362328999421 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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