Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?
Several individual believe that being successful is the most effective method to measure the intelligence; however other people argue that measuring intelligence can be done by using different ways.
I do believe that there are more than one method to measure the intelligence, and this point of view will be discussed in the remaining part of the essay.
Intelligence not only has a major impact on the person himself, but also on the other people around him, so smart human being is expected to guide and lead people who are under his authority to be successful. That can illustrate that, being influential to other people can be also a great way to measure the one's intelligence.
On the other hand, some people would claim that ; despite the success, there are various contributory factors to create a successful person, such as a high quality education, even luck can play a key role in helping some people becoming successful. For example, we have heard of many celebrities who have become stars in various field as a result of a totally unforeseeable coincidence . Surely, that is not a rational prediction for all the time; however in real life situations, it certainly happens.
In conclusion; though, success is considered an appropriate way to judge how smart someone is, but there also are other different methods to measure it. Personally, I think we should not neglect factors like education, cultural background, and luck in measuring the success of a person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02857142857 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8952775464 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.0764465446 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.888888889 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2222222222 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5555555556 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413607919858 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156482855751 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101319859878 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213910340181 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951165483716 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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