More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
Plastic pollution is one of the most biggest threats humans can face in the 21 century, and the wild animals are about to extint.
Wild animals are a challenge to humans mainly because it’s very dangerous and hard to deal with hunters, hunters can shoot the animals that’s been in the danger zone to extinct,secondhand we need to extract somethings from them but it effects them in ways. The things we have to extract from animals are actually a lot as an example snakes, we take the venom from the snake and turn it into medicine but of course it’s not that simple, it’s very tricky to know which snake that you’re dealing with and if you’re a professional or not or it can be life threatening to you and them, in fact you can get bitten that you could die and snakes when they feel threatened they can actually kill them selves.
If we think this through there’s a lot if hidden solutions, hunters can be obviously dangerous to wild animals but if they knew the places those animals can be so does the professionals, they can mark the land and state that it’s dangerous and wrape it all with an electric fence so the shooters cannot get through it and if they get caught trying they go to prison. Snakes is very smart and can sense the danger so if they felt uncomfortable or unsafe they can have problems so, snakes catchers have to get trained to make the snakes feel safer and not to use force on them because if they died we can’t extract the venom but if we truly understood their intentions we would take whatever we want without hurting any animals or get them killed.
It’s challenging to try to understand how everything works and not to make a mess, either it’s tiger’s or snakes they are wild and deadly but without them the would fall apart.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'biggest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: biggest
Plastic pollution is one of the most biggest threats humans can face in the 21 centu...
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Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , secondhand
...hat’s been in the danger zone to extinct,secondhand we need to extract somethings from them...
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Line 3, column 688, Rule ID: THEM_SELVES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'themselves'?
Suggestion: themselves
... feel threatened they can actually kill them selves. If we think this through there’s ...
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Line 9, column 18, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'trying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: trying
... get them killed. It’s challenging to try to understand how everything works and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, second, so, in fact, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55108359133 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43729359752 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489164086687 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.2975951904 261% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.327623764 49.4020404114 231% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 245.0 106.682146367 230% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.8333333333 20.7667163134 259% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124026803839 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723569528496 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339763231517 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0750312931526 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031981953507 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.9 13.0946893788 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.4 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.0 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.1190380762 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.