Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?
It is argued that success is the best measure of intelligence, However, others have different ways of measuring intelligence. This essay agrees with that the notion that success is the best measure of intelligence is a common but flawed belief. The essay will first look at the relationship between success and intelligence, and how intelligence can be measured.
There is certainly some correlation between intelligence and certain markers of success, such as educational attainment, career advancement, or financial wealth. Intelligence is a broad and elusive concept that encompasses a wide range of cognitive abilities, including reasoning, problem-solving, memory, creativity, and critical thinking. These skills are not always directly reflected in
outward measures of success, which can be influenced by a host of other factors, such as socioeconomic status, access to opportunities, personality traits, and even luck. Many individuals who are undoubtedly highly intelligent may not achieve the conventional markers of success, either by choice or due to circumstances beyond their control.
On the other hand, some successful individuals may not possess exceptional intellectual abilities, but have instead leveraged other strengths, such as strong interpersonal skills, determination, or the ability to navigate complex social and professional environments. Psychologists have identified various types of intelligence, such as emotional intelligence, spatial intelligence, and linguistic intelligence, which are not always captured by traditional measures like IQ tests or academic performance. These alternative forms of intelligence are equally valuable and can lead to different paths of success. For example, individuals with high emotional intelligence may excel in fields that require strong interpersonal skills, such as leadership, counselling, or social work, while those with exceptional spatial intelligence may thrive in fields like engineering, architecture, or design.
In conclusion, while success can reflect certain intellectual abilities, it should not be viewed as the sole or definitive measure of intelligence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 391, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13907284768 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.53042251905 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569536423841 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 0.809619238477 1112% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.4070962203 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.5 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335410720476 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130798690133 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647873242273 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194101404661 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763966080727 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.72 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.63 12.4159519038 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.