“Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.”
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Zoos importance can’t be neglected in any culture or country; part of the public consider them as animal heritage because it tells about species that nobody knew about before.
It’s argued that zoos shouldn’t be exist or be as a destination for those who seek place to spend time and entertain. undoubtedly, animals’ flee, wild animals in particular, isn’t safe neither in middle east nor any other region as it might lead to severe accidents, an instance for this, when guards forget to lock cages there, definitely, chaos will be assured among public roads. Alternatively, government and institutions which are responsible for animals must allocate extra expenditures in order to maintain order and security by providing electric locks and advanced protection systems.
Notwithstanding, other people tend to believe that these places should be exist in order to prevent animal extinction. Protecting animals hasn’t been an easy mission throughout generations, nonetheless it deserves to exert effort and fees to protect distinct kinds. Undeniably, children, youngsters as well as adults consider zoos to be one of the fabulous places to visit with their extended family. Because the visit might be expensive, there are special institutions, which care for animal health, provide the public with discount vouchers, merely to keep the spirit up as a kind of encouragement. Gathering all these species in one place requires not only government awareness but also the society must be involved.
As previously stated, the opponents believe that displaying animals among public should be forbidden must put into consideration how zoos are crucial for entertainment. As far as I’m concerned, all kinds of animals must be preserved, protected and taken care of in such special places such as zoos. In my opinion, Public services institutions, which are concerned, have to raise awareness through media, billboards, advertisements along with commercials in order not to limit or ban places like zoos.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, nonetheless, so, well, in particular, kind of, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46474358974 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98731532375 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.7073042752 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.083333333 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26181402341 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102409754615 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561498693442 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162400163283 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254827960486 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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