It is common practice for some students to take a gap year after graduating high school to work and/or travel. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
Nowadays, some students are preferring to take a gap year after attending high school to encourage their business skills nor their educational information on a specific major of their educational journey. There are a lot of advantages for this particular topic. Moreover, I will discuss in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, the globalization has encouraged the young generation to gain in the early stage of their life so as to an alumna. Moreover, they try to search for a part-time job or they fill out their time with taking new courses to help them gain more knowledge for their own future. These courses are a big benefit for their educational journey, it will surely help them during their studies and even their jobs. For example, someone who’s willing to enter in the computer technology university. Therefore, he takes a lot of course in this major which having a verified certifications which gradually will help him in the future to gain more skills.
In addition, the society nowadays is progressing unexpectedly. And due to that, every individual person is in a hurry to achieve a big trophy in their life, so as to study and explore new informational knowledge depending on their educational major. Also, traveling aboard to see new place and have new experiences in life. For instance, searching for a job aboard to learn a new language and totally new lifestyle will obviously make you have some new skills which is great for your social life. As a result, they will gradually have more skills and more confidence in themselves.
To conclude, I would like to say that taking a year gap after the high school is one’s personal choice. So, it is good to do what he feels like doing instead of following others and not gaining anything because if your made something and your heart wasn’t totally into it then it wont be as exciting as if you made it and you’re totally into it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...o gain in the early stage of their life so as to an alumna. Moreover, they try to search...
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... to achieve a big trophy in their life, so as to study and explore new informational kno...
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...o do what he feels like doing instead of following others and not gaining anythin...
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...ou made it and you’re totally into it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8501529052 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75440286148 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550458715596 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0901820709 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.733333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195659108636 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644790061988 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713658456723 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136550867067 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744033875321 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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